LI: To recount a 5 minute snapshot of one experience you had at camp
I could feel my excitement flow all over my body as I hoped into the kayak. My whole group was getting ready to bring the rest of the kayaks down as the instructor pushed me out into the water.
The water was cold as I touched it with my hands. I started paddling towards my friend. And keep on bump to my friend boat Then the boat bump and flip over and I fell in the water but I was laughing and then my friend let me grab her so she pulled me to land . but I was wet Then it was to go i grab the boat and keep on walking and went up to the the camp and i change my clothes
Last week we went to camp at Kokako Lodge. My 5 minute snapshot shows my personal voice and I have tried hard to paint a picture with my words to describe what I was doing and how I felt.I found this activity great because i get learn new suff and i was happy about my self
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Hello Tanisha!
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing recount you have written! It sounds like you had a very exciting experience at camp! I know that the water is very cold, so you must have been shivering! I did kayaking too and it was very exciting!
What did you do to make you fall into the water?
Ka pai Tanisha!